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.:: Broken Childhood ::.

I wish I could be the one you were proud off,
I wish I could be as perfect as you want me to be.
But I know this pain only exsist as a provement,
that I am not the child you want me to be.

I wish you would be interested in me, and in my life.
I wish you could care, but these tears only prove,
that you don't, that I'm not the child you want.
You still turn your back to me. Like I'm not there.

Your not a bad person, your eyes just never search for me,
as I do not live up to your expeditions, I never did.
You rather cover your eyes, and ears, for the wicked child,
that child you brougth to life, because you do not want me.

Some day I know I will find a place I belong too,
a place where this pain will fade away, even if scars stay.
But I know, that some day will be without you,
because even now, you still don't accept me.
...im not in the mood to write a comment, ill reply to any questions, rude remarks, or compliments if u commet.

thank u for reading.
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foolishbunny Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
that cuts alittle close to me to,i mean i deal or try to but yeah i kinda feel i know where your coming from,its not easy but it gets better well has anyway cuz yeah what you say in last part a place to blong

but :hugs: very powerful,emotional,and very good poem i'm faving this and keep it

you are damn good at this i must admitt haha
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fatcat89poetry Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2007
that smily is : hug : not hugs^^'

and thank you :hug::glomp::cuddle:
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foolishbunny Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thanks for telling me :hug: there,like that?^^haha

and its alright^^
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